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If you were passion
And I were a cup
I'd hold myself under your waters
And be filled up

If you were love
And I were a heart
I'd promise myself
I'd never go tart

If you were a star
And I were an eye
I'd gaze upon you
So high in the sky

If you were a word
And I were paper
I'd make myself
As big as a skyscraper
©2008-2010 ~Pizzajosh
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I like the first stanza...

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:iconlilith-the-feared:
Nice job.

Maybe add more? :D
:iconpizzajosh:
I could, but I doubt it.
:iconlilith-the-feared:
Why!

I think you could. You're already an amazing writer as it is.
:iconalexofdenial:
I like the first stanza as well as the last.

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Have a great day.
:iconnimelf:
I absolutly love the first two lines :heart: good job!

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and by the way, I adore you... in frighting, dangerous ways.

"All was well"? Who the fuck do you think you're kidding, lady?

Draco & Hermione = :heart:
:iconpizzajosh:
Thanks, those are about the only two I like as well. The seems crappy compared to it. Sadly...
:iconnimelf:
I don't think the rest was crappy- lol- I just love the first part!

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and by the way, I adore you... in frighting, dangerous ways.

"All was well"? Who the fuck do you think you're kidding, lady?

Draco & Hermione = :heart:
:iconpizzajosh:
Well, thanks anyway. I am not that satisfied with it. Maybe I'll mess around with it later.

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